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Definitely a good continuation on the last chapter. It solidifies the dynamic between Siena and Kira.  Though I'm a bit uncomfortable with the fanservice along the way, but heed it no mind, as it is only my preference.  I have to say more descriptions will help people get engaged in the story more. ^^

I finally got the chance to read your fanfiction!  I like how you showcased the plot, as well as answering questions without spoiling too much. I also like the dynamic between Kira and Sienna, as it makes me interested on picking them up when I have extra Blood Tokens for them (which is... maybe de...

I await for the future release of the chapter, then. :D I wonder how the two introduced character will meet? Answer it with a new entry, lol.  Thanks for your feedback! I happen to be comfortable with grammar as its part of my language studies, but I'll definitely make a few mistakes along the way....

I finally got the chance to read your fanfiction!  I like how you showcased the plot, as well as answering questions without spoiling too much. I also like the dynamic between Kira and Sienna, as it makes me interested on picking them up when I have extra Blood Tokens for them (which is... maybe dec...

Finally got a chance to read this story.  I'm not good at spotting grammar mistakes, so I can't help you with that. The plot itself is interesting enough, as it managed to make me read all the way to the end. I'm also intrigued on how it will unfold.  I guess I'd seen a lot of "main-character-transp...